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HeyCoffeeEyes
02/01/07, 04:27 PM
#4
I must confess I have no ear for poetry
But perhaps if you were to read me a few verses
I could come to enjoy myself
It's not meter or measure which I prefer
But the superior cadence of your unhurried voice
I want your accent, your vocabulary
Your idiosyncratic pronunciation of common words
Speak assured
Say the phrases as they come to you
And I shall find something I can love

OveriseFan
02/01/07, 04:48 PM
It's the kind of poem that, while not brilliant, makes you go "Aw, that's sweet", so I think Mission Accomplished.

Nice work, it's cute.

HeyCoffeeEyes
02/01/07, 07:39 PM
Yeah, as you could probably tell by the fact tha I posted 4 very short, unnamed poems in one day, these are a bit tossed off. Thanks for all the feedback you've been giving though. Much appreciated.