Torn Steps of a Hero

[TheFallenScene]

Umm..it's..something differnet?

Torn Steps of a Hero

The champion drowned
The tragic fate brought the hero down
Nothing left but fear and stray thoughts
Everything we had taking away
The pills don’t work
I swear the flashing lights would bring us back
Shading in the past brought ourselves here

(Chorus)
Race away to the forgotten city
Runaway to your summer friend
Where torment fades and everything is away
Away from here I say goodbye

You’d love to run home
But no one will listen to you
You’re one small voice
In the small town of a lost hero
I don’t want you to see me
Maybe the balloons will carry me away

(Chorus)
Race away to the forgotten city
Runaway to your summer friend
Where the torment fades and everything is away
Away from here I say goodbye

The wind has swept us away
Try to catch a floating thought
Remind us about the hero
A hero still remaining unloved
Bring him back to the city of dismay

(Chorus)
Race away to the forgotten city
Runaway to your summer friend
Where the torment fades and everything is away
Away from here I say goodbye

These are the torn steps of a forgotten hero

[xAlexisonfirex]

it's ok, better then alot of the stuff i've read on here. more original at least.

[TheFallenScene]

Thank You Sir.

[wadejunkie]

i think its good

except this line:

"The tragic fate brought the hero down"

talking about fate bringing the hero down, its kind of like... well of course fate brought the hero down

you know? it just sounds like such a given

[Rufio217]

yeah...i have to agree, but i kinda liked it besides that

[TheFallenScene]

Thanks everyone. Just the part about the "fate" was just kinda added in at the last second. I'll either remove it or replace it with something else.

[MaybeOneDay]

sounds like something Story Of The Year would write, but i like it.

[MaybeOneDay]

(time to turn the tables)

if your going to write a creative song like that, then don't give it a very un-original title. seriously, every other band uses the word 'hero', somewhere on their cd.

[xAlexisonfirex]

lol.

such animosity in a board supposedly filled with helping music lovers.

[MaybeOneDay]

some songs that include 'hero':

Chad Kroeger and Josey Scott - Hero
Story Of The Year - And The Hero Will Drown
All Wound Up - Hero
Pink Floyd - The Hero's Return
Foo Fighters - My Hero
Foreigner - Juke Box Hero
The Ataris - The Hero Dies In This One
Apleseed Cast - Antihero
The Juliana Theory - Music Box Hero
Mariah Carey - Hero
Brian McKnight - Superhero
Megadeth - The World Needs A Hero
Sky - Superhero
Steps - Hero
Verve Pipe - Hero
Vixen - Fallen Hero
Donots - Superhero
J. Englishman - The Hero
One Dollar Short - Unsung Hero
Reel Big Fish - Brand New Hero
Area 7 - Unsung Hero
Offspring - No Hero
Superchick - Hero
Marilyn Manson - Working Class Hero
Black Sabbath - Zero The Hero
Stereo Fuse - Superhero
David Crosby - Hero
Footloose - Holding Out For A Hero
Bruce Springsteen - Local Hero
Weird Al Yankovich - Ode To A Superhero
Negative - Last Hero
Enrique Eglasias - Hero
2 Be 3 - I'll Be Your Hero
Accept - I Wanna Be No Hero
AFI - Highschool Football Hero
The B-52's - Hero Worship
Alan Jackson - Working Class Hero
The Bangles - Hero Takes A Fall
Blue System - You'll Be My Hero
Breeze - Hero
The Cure - I'm A Cult Hero
David Bowie - Working Class Hero
Def Leppard - I Wanna Be Your Hero
Harvey Danger - Ballad Of The Tragic Hero
Jewel - Mama's Little Hero
Level 42 - My Hero
Live - Here Of Love
Loverboy - Home Town Hero
Meatloaf - Rock 'N' Roll Hero
Metallica - Hero Of The Day
Queen - The Hero
Rush - Nobody's Hero
Lacking The Trust Of Truth - Hero Vs. Villian


some bands that include 'hero':

3 Minute Hero
Gym Class Heroes
Hell Is For Heroes
Hero
Home Town Hero
Far From Heroes
Not Quite Heroes
Unsung Hero
Desktop Heroes
Pseudo Heroes

some cd's that inclue 'hero' in the title:

Agnostic Front/Discipline - Working Class Hero
Ann Berretta - To All Our Fallen Heroes
Arlo - Stap The Unstoppable Hero
All Wound Up - Hero
Brilliant Zero - Ditch The Hero
Business - Saturday's Hero
Desktop Heroes - The Desktop Heroes EP
Fourth Quarter Jinx - Fallen Heroes
Hogan's Hero - Hogan's Hero
Major Accident - Clockwork Heroes
Project 86 - Truthless Heroes
Reach The Sky - Everybody's Hero

[TheFallenScene]

Ooooh! Man you got me there!! Take what I did and turn it around onto me. So..are you going to get original sometime?

[MaybeOneDay]

probably not

and i expanded upon what you did..i added album names and band names to the list! hah!