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jamesymmw
07/19/03, 12:33 AM
I'm Brand Spanking New here...so I thought I'd post some stuff...So whatever you think, just speak your mind...

"Always First to Draw the short straw"

Staring at your roof, you're on top, but I see through you
I'm falling apart at your feet and you can tell
When a room's this dark, light can be so rare
I'm under your broken bed, Gasping for your air

It's the millionth time that I've had to tell this story
Different people, different places, you're the constant
They don't know, but they subconsciously ask the question
I'd never dream of turning the clock back

I was always first to draw the short straw
Then you came and you took the straws away
Yeah, always first to draw the short straw
Then you came and you took my fears away

You're idle daze is once again stuck on me
Reach for the knife, It's not in your back
Once again my trail leads to where you lie
My awakening step confirms what we believe

I was always first to draw the short straw
Then you came and you took the straws away
Yeah, always first to draw the short straw
Then you came and you took my fears away

Forget the past, Dream about the future
You're insomnia sleeps when you fit into me
So i'll steal your words to emphasise whats pure
I'd kill to love you and you know that

jamesymmw
07/19/03, 12:36 AM
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"My Biggest Mistake"

How does it feel to know your my piece a' heaven
How does it feel to know without you this is hell
How does it feel to know every time I smile you're the reason
How does it feel?

I'm so much closer than you could imagine
I'm so much closer than you could ever dream

Take me away and hang me on your wall
Take me away and attach me to your side
Can't wait for the day that I'm yours and your mine
Can't for the day when I wake up in your arms

Your much more amazing than I could imagine
Your so much more than I could ask for

You call and you ask what you mean to mean
It's so simple you mean everything

jamesymmw
07/19/03, 12:41 AM
'Find Me'

Lost without you
Should I cower from life?
My Hearts abused
It's bleeding for your desire

I'm drifting away and it's not just my mind this time
My memory's stained and your swing still rocks in the trees

It's the hours of endless talking that I miss so much
And I wish I could just turn around and touch you

Aging concern
We wont be moulded
Beautiful Freaks
Striving to break free

The broken mirror mends and there's nothing left in our way
So cut to the chase, i'm dreaming of what will be

Look at your map, The X is where I'll be

TheFallenScene
07/19/03, 07:04 AM
There are a few flaws here and there in the first two songs, but mostly I like them. In the last song remove the line "And X is where I'll be". That just kinda sounds tacky.

MaybeOneDay
07/19/03, 07:28 AM
"Look at your map, The X is where I'll be"

^ most likely my favourite line in the last song

jamesymmw
07/19/03, 09:35 PM
Cool, anyone else?