The Anthem Of Your Underground

[MaybeOneDay]

"The Anthem Of Your Underground"
By Brandon Alllin

Verse 1
I look around this empty room
I can't imagine what I'd do
Without this place, a part of my life
It's hard to tell if i'd even survive
The bed's are made, the light's are off
The time's have changed but there not lost
The memories will always last
Captured in our photograph's

Chorus
So just what it's like to be
Another part of history
With our world upside down
And and another day gone by, because
The clock is ticking out
The word's falling from our mouth's
Day's far and in between
And you'll never be the same
As me

Verse 2
The only day's I felt alive
Were spent here on the summer night's
Sitting on the dock till 4 AM
Watching the sunrise once again
The door's are locked, the place is clean
In a year where will we be
I can't forget the moment's we shared
Am I the only one, who ever cared ?

Chorus
So just what it's like to be
Another part of history
With our world upside down
And another night gone by, because
The clock is ticking out
The words falling from our mouth's
Day's far and in between
And you'll never be the same
As me

Bridge
Were sitting
Were sitting on the dock
Were waiting by the clock
Were watching the night fall
And hearing the sunrise
Were sitting on the ground
Were passing every sound
Were singing to this anthem
This anthem of your
Anthem of your
This anthem of your
Underground

Chorus
So just what it's like to be
Another part of history
With our world upside down
And another day gone by, because
The clock is ticking out
The words falling from our mouth's
Day's far and in between
And you'll never be the same, because
The day's are passing by
And were living out our lives
Another endless night
And you won't ever be the same
As me

[wadejunkie]

that sounds like you took lots of lyrics from Ataris songs and rewrote them

"So just what it's like to be
Another part of history "

i dont understand that, as a sentence

overall, i dont like this because its really corny like an Ataris song. is it a reference to Saves the Day - At Your Funeral, or is 'anthem of your underground' from something else, too?

"The word's falling from our mouth's"

i like that line a lot

[xAlexisonfirex]

i agree with wadejunkie BUT, i still htink it is good.

it's much better then the

When we were
so young
our lives were
so dumb


shit you posted before.

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by wadejunkie
that sounds like you took lots of lyrics from Ataris songs and rewrote them

"So just what it's like to be
Another part of history "

i dont understand that, as a sentence

overall, i dont like this because its really corny like an Ataris song. is it a reference to Saves the Day - At Your Funeral, or is 'anthem of your underground' from something else, too?

"The word's falling from our mouth's"

i like that line a lot

I don't see how these lyrics are like the ataris, but that's your opinion.

and the lines " So just what it's like to be, Another part of history"..i didn't expect too many people to understand. there's a story behind this song, but i don't exactly feel like getting into that right now. yes, the name was taken from the At your Funeral song by saves the day, but the name fits the song (if you knew the story) perfectly.

I take your criticism well and think about it, but im perfectly happy with the way this song is now.

[MaybeOneDay]

if you could explain how you find this song like an ataris song, that would be appreciated.

[TheFallenScene]

Please! Don't write songs about another "anthem"! Everyother song on everyother CD has created has their own anthem!

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by TheFallenScene
Please! Don't write songs about another "anthem"! Everyother song on everyother CD has created has their own anthem!

im only aware of a few...anthem and anthem part 2 by blink, then the anthem by good charlotte, and then less than jake named their album Anthem....but other than that, im blank.


oh and in response to your advice........no.

[TheFallenScene]

By the way I seriously didn't mean every other cd, pathetic that I had to point that out. Atleast come up with something original next time.

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by TheFallenScene
By the way I seriously didn't mean every other cd, pathetic that I had to point that out. Atleast come up with something original next time.

I'm pretty sure that since I named 4, and that was all I could think of, I was aware you didn't actually mean every cd. So really, there was no need for you to point it out, open your eyes.

Oh, and since this song isn't original enough for you, then I might as well explain how I completely ripped the title off from the song 'At Your Funeral' by Saves The Day:

"This song will become, the anthem of your underground"

[TheFallenScene]

A list of songs with the "Anthem" :

(Enjoy :D)

Skinlab - Anthem For A Fallen Star

10000 Maniacs - Anthem For Doomed Youth

Silverchair - Anthem For The Year 2000

Paul Robeson - Anthem Of The Ussr

Blink 182 - Anthem Part 2

Linda Eder - Anthem

Five Iron Frenzy - Anthem

Youth Alive - Anthem

Blink 182 - Anthem

Rush - Anthem

John Loudermilk - Anthem

Flick - Anthem

Phantom Planet - Anthem

Deep Purple - Anthem

Wildhearts - Anthem

Chess - Anthem

Dar Williams - Anthem

Janez Detd - Anti-Anthem

Leftover Crack - Atheist Anthem

Weird Al Yankovic - Bedrock Anthem

Foxy Brown - Bk Anthem

Dmx - Bloodline Anthem

Kansas - Cheyenne Anthem

City High - City High Anthem

Anthem - East Coast Anthem

50 Cent - G-Unit Anthem

Mojo Stuck Hang Em High (Losers Anthem)

Marilyn Manson - Irresponsible Hate Anthem

Less Than Jake Look What Happened (Anthem)

Leann Rimes - National Anthem

Postal Service -The Natural Anthem

E-thugs - Our Anthem

Notorious B.I.G. - Player's Anthem

Dmx Ruff Ryders - Anthem

Guttermouth - Skater's Anthem

Live - Take My Anthem

Eminem - The Anthem

Anthem -The Anthem

NG3 - The Anthem

Slipknot - The Heretic Anthem

Carman - The Prayer Anthem

Boy Sets Fire - Toy Gun Anthem

Voodoo Glow Skulls - Voodoo Anthem

Bleach - What Will Your Anthem Be?

Taking Back Sunday - White Trash Anthem
:D
45 songs about an Anthem. Just from one site. Should I find more?

[MaybeOneDay]

no need. well maybe you should, that way you could waste your time some more. either way, im not going to take your advice.

[xAlexisonfirex]

anthem of our dying day- story of the year


46.

just kidding, who gives a shit about the word anthem. give help to the songs not bash them man.

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by xAlexisonfirex
anthem of our dying day- story of the year


46.

just kidding, who gives a shit about the word anthem. give help to the songs not bash them man.

i would agree with you there, but i just felt the need to list ton's of songs and bands and cd's using the word "Hero" in one of his threads for a song he wrote. Heh, im sad.

[TheFallenScene]

Whatever man..This will go back and forth so..forget it.

[MaybeOneDay]

Alright, alright...i hear ya

Ok, so I understand my originality isn't that great, but i tried.

[Rufio217]

That is pathetic that you gone online just to look up songs with the name anthem in them to back up your calim, /c you don't know half those bands or half those songs....

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by Rufio217
That is pathetic that you gone online just to look up songs with the name anthem in them to back up your calim, /c you don't know half those bands or half those songs....

yeah but you cant say that to him alone...i did the same thing except for using the word hero about one of his songs. were both equal assholes.

[ParisInFlames55]

i think the story is pretty good. is there music to go along with it. and the story would be nice as well so i can understand it better.i like when i know the real story behind the lyrics.

[Charlito Cafe]

The nostalgic element sort of reminds me of Here in This Diary by the Ataris, and I think that's what that other dude was pointing out.

[MaybeOneDay]

Originally posted by ParisInFlames55
i think the story is pretty good. is there music to go along with it. and the story would be nice as well so i can understand it better.i like when i know the real story behind the lyrics.

basically its about a kid who has to move away from all his friends and stuff..and doesnt want to leave becuase all his friends and that town will be gone from his life and he feels like he belongs there.

i can relate to this song, so thats why i wrote it.