with my last words.

[xAlexisonfirex]

i would reach my hands to the sky. and pull down the heavens for you. so i could give you the best gift you have ever received.anythign to make you smile. anything to increase your heartbeat. anythignn to taste your lips. anything to feel you breathe. if you put a gun to my head and asked for my last words, i'd close my eyes and invite the bullet. in death lies your dreams, so i'll be seeing you soon.i'm infected. and on my death bed. i hardly have the energy to speak, but with my last words i'd sing you your favorite song.

[MaybeOneDay]

that's deep

[xAlexisonfirex]

bumpdizzle.

[dakknox]

that is a way rad song, i like the idea of her putting the gun to your head and asking for your last words, then you accepting the bullet, and then saying in death lies your dreams. "So i'll see you soon" is a great little set up which i like alot, later

[Rufio217]

I like it...

[wewin]

i would reach my hands to the sky. and pull down the heavens for you. so i could give you the best gift you have ever received.anythign to make you smile. anything to increase your heartbeat. anythignn to taste your lips. anything to feel you breathe. if you put a gun to my head and asked for my last words, i'd close my eyes and invite the bullet. in death lies your dreams, so i'll be seeing you soon.i'm infected. and on my death bed. i hardly have the energy to speak, but with my last words i'd sing you your favorite song.

Great parody! You've done an amazing job of ridiculing the whole "suicide love" genre of punk that's so popular these days! If I didn't know better, I'd say that you actually thought that this was a good song!

Joking aside: This song sucks because...

1. The notion of doing monumental things for a girl that hates you is overplayed and stupid. Why would anyone EVER do ANYTHING for someone that would "put a gun to [your] head and ask for [your] last words"?

2.The idea of coupling a "love" song with "despair" to try to "make it" something "interesting" doesn't "work." It just makes it sound "cliched" and "super-suckworthy".

3.It sounds like every song written by these metalcore bands like:
--------poison the well, alexisonfire, a jealousy issue, and more! It is a trendy thing right now to write about how poor little you is SOOOO devoted to this girl but she can't see your worth and oh you'd do ANYTHING for her but she KILLS you and it's SOOOO DEEEP!!!!11

you're retarded.

[xAlexisonfirex]

well, wewin if we aren't allowed to write about any subject that has been written before then what should we write about?

hey maybe ill write a song asbout a rhinocerous on the fucking moon i don't think thats been done before.

you are sad.

[wewin]

Write about something new and different...you're a good writer, you could probably crank out songs like these easily.

Challenge yourself and write something new and something cool. Or something super well-done, not just well done.

You're a good writer, try something new.

Yeah, I am kind of sad. It's really rainy outside today and I have to stay in here.