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MaybeOneDay
07/19/03, 11:03 AM
This song's about a kid who for him, school = torture. Your typical outcast is the character in this song, but this tells a true story that's happened to many im sure. The kid doesn't handle thing's and think's theres nothing worth living for, so he turns for the worst. Not personal to me, but some will be able to relate to it in some way or another. It's untitled now, its a fairly mellow tune, but its got powerful verses and a very melodic chorus.
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" Untitled "
By Brandon Allin

Verse 1
There once was this guy
He lived around the corner
I saw them laughing
At him over his best friends shoulder
His mom kissed him goobye
She said ' I'll see you later '
But she didn't know that
Life was over in half an hour
All the things around him
Reminded him of his life
Spent hours in the bathroom stall
His hands shut out his eyes
He went to his room and
Lay there silent
All the walls around him, now a shade of violet

Pre-Chorus
All of this will soon be over
There is nothing worth to live for
Packed up and he's ready to go now

Chorus
What you say will haunt you later
Don't try to act as if your greater
He had, the perfect summer
But now, it's back to torture
Just try, try to slow down
You've pushed him to the point now
You've pushed him to the point now

Verse 2
He packed up his book bag
Went to his morning classes
Walked down the hallway
And the guys knocked off his glasses
He pulled out his notebook
Wrote down his final goodbyes
Told all his friends and family
The past 6 months had been lies
He left the classroom
Halfway through at quarter after
Went to his locker
He pulled out a bit of powder
Dropped to the floor and
Lay their silent
The walls around him, now a shade of violet

Pre-Chorus
There you go it's finally over
There was nothing worth to live for
Packed up and he's ready to go now

Chorus
What you say will haunt you later
Don't try to act as if your greater
He had, the perfect summer
But now, it's back to torture
Just try, try to slow down
You've pushed him to the point now
You've pushed him to the point now

Bridge
He's packed up and he's ready to go now
He's packed up and he's ready to go now
He's packed up and he's ready to go now
You've pushed him to the point now

End Chorus
What you say will haunt you later
Don't try to act as if your greater
He had, the perfect summer
But now, it's back to torture
Just try, try to slow down
You've pushed him to the point now
He's packed up and he's ready to go now
You've pushed him to the point now
You've pushed him to the point now
You've pushed him to the point now
You've pushed him to the point now

MaybeOneDay
07/19/03, 11:22 AM
bump this shiznit

Clarett'sGreyGoose
07/19/03, 11:30 AM
thats good man. you gots skeelz.

MaybeOneDay
07/19/03, 11:34 AM
Originally posted by PlaysWithFire
thats good man. you gots skeelz.

thanks dude

neb nawoc
07/20/03, 01:04 PM
damnit brandon, why do you have to be so damn cool?

nostalgia
07/20/03, 01:26 PM
That is very good. I am impressed.

MaybeOneDay
07/20/03, 02:16 PM
thank you

and ben, i guess it just comes naturally...........haha jk man

Charlito Cafe
07/20/03, 02:42 PM
Possible title (seems a little obvious): The Point

Great song man.

Frodo
07/20/03, 04:15 PM
good stuff b-dawg

MaybeOneDay
07/20/03, 05:32 PM
haha, thank you thank you

MaybeOneDay
07/20/03, 05:34 PM
althought the point sounds like a great title...but thanks to byron, he came up with the title for me. and i really like it.

its called Shade Of Violet

Rufio217
07/20/03, 07:05 PM
I love the idea, adn i love the message, but...idk, some of it just doesn't click for me...it's good, but ya know?!?!

MaybeOneDay
07/21/03, 03:24 AM
thanks man, i appreciate that...tell me what doesnt click for you ? it would help.

MaybeOneDay
07/25/03, 05:44 PM
bump

blaarg
07/25/03, 05:48 PM
wow, i don't think you could write a bad song if you tried, or even if you collaborated with the notorious B.I.G. (even though i think he's dead) ...anyway, i like it

MaybeOneDay
07/25/03, 06:13 PM
Originally posted by blaarg
wow, i don't think you could write a bad song if you tried, or even if you collaborated with the notorious B.I.G. (even though i think he's dead) ...anyway, i like it

haha, thanks alot man. same goes to you, honestly.