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Greg
07/19/03, 11:53 AM
something i just typed up. it's bad i think. and i know this will be moved. but i figured more people will see it if i put it here. i dont know why i wrote it or what it's even really about. it just kinda flew out....

"untitled"

Let’s all get drunk and have sex like crazy.
We’ll all claim innocence and abort the baby.
Let’s shoot up and smoke and say we’re cool.
In a few years we’ll see who’s really the fool.

You all say I’m a waste of life, I’m too lazy.
Well I look at you and say you‘re fucking crazy.
Let’s go 60 on 35 miles per hour roads.
Lets all wear salvation army clothes.

You act like you’re something different.
But it’s still just an act, dumb and redundant.
I’m sick of trying to be one of you.
I quit, there’s nothing that you can do.

You are a walking contradiction.
Just stop with the procrastination.
Your antics are starting to make me sick.
Hear time fly by, tick, tick, tick.

You’re all looking to get a piece.
Staring at the girl with the 2 piece.
Forget sex and even making out.
I’d like to see what love is really about.
nostalgia
07/19/03, 11:55 AM
Genius.....*cough* :D :( :rolleyes:
SexAndViolence
07/19/03, 11:55 AM
haha that was pretty good. good job :)
FallingOut
07/19/03, 12:13 PM
I like it, it seems like a rapper would do that.
torch
07/19/03, 12:22 PM
Nice, greg. A few lines were pretty wordy. But still, damn good.
Clarett'sGreyGoose
07/19/03, 12:25 PM
Originally posted by torch
Nice, greg. A few lines were pretty wordy. But still, damn good.
SnowintheSummer
07/19/03, 12:47 PM
very good except the last stanza, because its like piece and piece which dont really rhyme lol and then... well this might be alright but fuck sex , lol. maybe if it was like fuck making out and sex itd sound better, although it doesnt quite have the same ring. you mean them as lyrics i hope?
ms y o o n
07/19/03, 01:25 PM
well done my friend
Billy
07/19/03, 01:27 PM
good on ya Greg
MaybeOneDay
07/19/03, 01:50 PM
yeah i really liked it

good work dude
theused_FSF
07/19/03, 01:58 PM
im sorry, i didnt actually read it, but im sure it was good
MaybeOneDay
07/19/03, 02:00 PM
i wrote a new song earlier today too...and it's in the Your Lyrics forum..the thread is called "this song is currently untitled" or something like that. it deals with the topic of teenage suicide resulted from bullying and harassment at school.

to get to the point, i would appreciate it if you all took a look at it over in that forum. my friends have said good things about it so far, and id like some more opinions.


http://forum.absolutepunk.net/showthread.php?s=&postid=299062#post299062
asubtledaggerx
07/19/03, 02:04 PM
haha your song made me laugh. But it's really good...when I attempt to write songs, I fail really badly :(
MaybeOneDay
07/19/03, 02:07 PM
oh and if anyone has any good song name ideas for that song i just gave the link too...that would be appreciated
Greg
07/20/03, 12:23 PM
BUMP

i changed it a little bit....
torch
07/20/03, 12:32 PM
Greg, you have the last 10 posts on this board.
dreamareality
07/20/03, 12:43 PM
its good, very creative
Patrick
07/20/03, 12:53 PM
uh oh do i hear a chant GREG GREG GREG GREG GREG GREG GREG GREG GREG
OscarMurder
07/20/03, 01:14 PM
i dont think its that great
Greg
07/20/03, 01:16 PM
Originally posted by OscarMurder
i dont think its that great

same here. but i guess alot of people like it.
OscarMurder
07/20/03, 01:20 PM
Originally posted by Greg
same here. but i guess alot of people like it.


hmmm i wonder why
Greg
07/20/03, 01:20 PM
Originally posted by OscarMurder
hmmm i wonder why

i have no idea.... or they're just lying... i don't know.
OscarMurder
07/20/03, 01:22 PM
Originally posted by Greg
i have no idea.... or they're just lying... i don't know.


yeah they are probably trying to spare your feelings or something
Greg
07/20/03, 01:24 PM
Originally posted by OscarMurder
yeah they are probably trying to spare your feelings or something

probably... cause personally i think it sucks. i just kinda wrote it real fast and stuff. and i just felt like sharing it.
OscarMurder
07/20/03, 01:26 PM
Originally posted by Greg
probably... cause personally i think it sucks. i just kinda wrote it real fast and stuff. and i just felt like sharing it.


thats cool and all, i just was saying that i didnt like it, and i wasnt about to pretend i did
Greg
07/20/03, 01:28 PM
Originally posted by OscarMurder
thats cool and all, i just was saying that i didnt like it, and i wasnt about to pretend i did

well thanks for being honest....
OscarMurder
07/20/03, 01:29 PM
Originally posted by Greg
well thanks for being honest....


alright your welcome, didnt want you to have a false sense of things you can do