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raabhimself
07/19/03, 02:19 PM
of my heart

this ruined puzzle was left untouched
the shouts of pain were all to much
and here i sit with no such luck
left in town is where i'm stuck

and run far away don't look back
for whats of me was left intact
and if you shout would i shout back
its of my heart thats left intact

kevin
07/19/03, 04:28 PM
don't use a rhyme scheme

LuckyToBe Alive
07/19/03, 07:08 PM
is that a dashboard song (this ruined puzzle)

nxthursday187
07/20/03, 08:42 PM
i liked your poem

raabhimself
07/21/03, 04:17 AM
i guess the first two words in teh poem are the same as some other words in some obscure song. nothing else is simmilar