be a man

[lovelesscrux]

when you're sittin' on the pot
and the toilet paper's hot
be a man
use your hand

[crit]

very original.

[strobelife]

I think that this piece would flow a lot more smoothly if you added "and" after the "be a man" line. Other than that I dont have any complaints.

[crit]

why would the toilet paper be hot? :shrug:

[JimGray]

I think that this piece would flow a lot more smoothly if you added "and" after the "be a man" line. Other than that I dont have any complaints.

A lot of potential, very reminiscent of Slipknot.

[a speedo model]

The title reminds me of that song in Mulan...