a straight line. perfect precision, and accuracy.

[xAlexisonfirex]

set me ablaze with your fiery eyes.watch me burn, watch me burn.
this is just a phase, i wont love you tomorrow. only if my heart stops beating.
save me from this place, it's full of makeshift poets. sing from your heart. your heart.

a straight line connects my heart to yours. these words walk a tightrope act. a well balanced format keeps them steady and sure. and if they fall...they will burn at our feet.

right out of my mouth and through your ears. like an arrow shot with perfect precision, and accuracy.

are you listening? are you listening?

in the hush of the crowd, you can hear my lips scream.

"oh, how i beg for the taste of you, my sweet!"

this is all we have, you and i. i and you, for a reason...for a lifetime...for a reason...for a lifetime.

[xAlexisonfirex]

bump

[MaybeOneDay]

its not bad..but i wasnt crazy about it

but then again..thats just me..and i dont tend to usually be a fan of the darker lyrics

[proeuthanasia]

Originally posted by xAlexisonfirex
set me ablaze with your fiery eyes.watch me burn, watch me burn.
this is just a phase, i wont love you tomorrow. only if my heart stops beating.
save me from this place, it's full of makeshift poets. sing from your heart. your heart.

a straight line connects my heart to yours. these words walk a tightrope act. a well balanced format keeps them steady and sure. and if they fall...they will burn at our feet.

right out of my mouth and through your ears. like an arrow shot with perfect precision, and accuracy.

are you listening? are you listening?

in the hush of the crowd, you can hear my lips scream.

"oh, how i beg for the taste of you, my sweet!"

this is all we have, you and i. i and you, for a reason...for a lifetime...for a reason...for a lifetime.

'save me from this place, it's full of makeshift poets.' - i like that, and i agree completely.

i was getting pretty into the song until the whole 'oh how i beg for the taste of you my sweet!' thing. it's corny and ruins the song. you can think of a better way to phrase it. who cares if it doesn't rhyme. if anything, a line that doesn't rhyme will only better the song and emphasize the fact that it's heartfelt and not just secondhand words spit out onto paper. *end of constructive criticism*

good job.

[xAlexisonfirex]

thanks man...but i think i will be setting aside all th elyrics i have posted on here for now. ne wstyle, me and my friend are trying to start something new...we talked about it all night and came up with the fact that this stuff is pretty good for what its worth, and that is if you are looking for this type of music...but we aren't sure if we really want to go that route.