Unconscious

[Rufio217]

My heart is open
Evening is upon us
Listening for a call
Insisting on a tune
Subdued by nature
Sacrificed by the wind
Again I here no answer
Waiting alone
In the darkness of tonight
Days go by
Again I here no answer
You never had to see
Overprotective hearts
Under a starlit sky
Referring to nothing
Believing what we’re told
Everything is quiet
Again I hear no answer
Understanding this pain
Tears fall down
In the light of day
Fear grows stronger
Undeniable feelings
Lurking at the heart
Saving it all
Making the most
In every little fall
Looking up
Every time I look
It’s just those inconsistent eyes
Staring back at me
Waiting for someone
Hoping for a day
Adding up the thoughts
To what is in my head
Mixed emotions
Again I hear no answer
Konstantine awakes
Ending a long slumber
Sacrificing her beauty
Mentioned in your eyes
Even in your smile
Saying all in nothing
Meaning every word
Interested in the heart
Leaving in the mind
Everything seems perfect

[punklet2101]

cool ;)

[Rufio217]

BUMP IT

[Rufio217]

anyone else have anythign to critic about it?

[BuriedAlive]

its ok but really long.

[Rufio217]

Yeah....I can't do anything aboutthe length because it is message to a girl... first letter of every line straight down makes a sentence...

[punklet2101]

Yeah....I can't do anything aboutthe length because it is message to a girl... first letter of every line straight down makes a sentence...

ahhh that's so rad!!

[Rufio217]

ha ha....rad <- that's awesome. I haven't heard that in forever

[maybe_mayhem]

that is quite creative. i could never do anything like that. nice job.

[Rufio217]

thanks bro

[punklet2101]

ha ha....rad <- that's awesome. I haven't heard that in forever

hehehe:o ;)