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xAlexisonfirex
07/23/03, 07:37 AM
this really isn't my style...but i just wrote it to vent a little bit. oh well, my style or not you may enjoy it...but don't look for anything great.


wasnt this supposed to mean forever?
not until you found another
who could suit you more accordingly
you raked our memories underneath the leaves

eight years is obviously
not a long time to you
eight years of friendship
doesn't mean alot to you

this is the last week ill see you
and i havnt talked to you once
ive left messages, you never return them
you havnt returned one in 3 months

whatever happened to just hanigng out
to all those dreams we had so well planned out
whatever happened to that ambitious kid i knew
he wanted to take on the world....this is not you

eight years is obviously
not a long time to you
eight years of friendship
doesn't mean alot to you

remember me?
i know you can't recognize my face anymore
but thats ok
i cant blame you, whats a friend when you've got a girl ya know?

it sickens me to believe
you've thrown away everything
we ever planned to be.

maybe you havn't thrown out those thoughts...just yet
but how would i know, i don't remember the last time we talked.

regardless, i'll be there to help your broken heart heal.

wewin
07/23/03, 08:53 AM
this song is much shittier than your usual stuff.

It comes across as whiny and stale. I cant sympathize with the speaker of this song at all. If you care so much about this friend or whatever, go talk to them and stop writing lonely "i'll save you if you need it" songs. For god's sake write something different.

And for the record, I LIKE emo/screamo music. I think that you just suck at writing it.
emo=emotional, go write about an emotion that isn't "sad" or "depressed" or "i'm a loser."

your other style of writing? I hate that less.

xAlexisonfirex
07/23/03, 04:31 PM
wewin, if i tell you before that the sogn isnt any good its just how i feel...i didnt write it to make a great song, i just wrote it to vent....THEN WHAT PLEASURE DO YOU GET OUT OF SAYING IT SUCKS?

I said it before you did!!


if somebody writes anythign that doesnt look like what you write OR like then it is the shittiest thign ever.

your posts are wastes of pixels.

eat my fuck.

wewin
07/24/03, 07:19 AM
i don't get ANY pleasure out of saying it sucks. I'm angry that someone would post something like this, with the full realization that it sucks, and have the gall to get angry at me for agreeing that, yes, it does suck.

I read your posts, I know you wrote it to vent, but you obviously thought that someone might like it, that it had some value, and so you posted it here. I just wanted to disabuse you of the notion that it might have any worth.

this really isn't my style...but i just wrote it to vent a little bit. oh well, my style or not you may enjoy it...but don't look for anything great.

Yeah, that's what you said, and I followed your instructions: i didn't look for anything great, and I got my wish.

xAlexisonfirex
07/24/03, 07:37 AM
haha dude, im not mad because you think it sucks. i know damn well it does. but the thing is can you tell me why you posted to say it sucks?

the only reason i can come up with that you post in everyones threads saying they suck, is so it seems as fi you are that much better then everyone else.