Highway Stories

[as_we_learn]

Returning from a long trip on the road
Black top and granite
as far as the emerald eye goes

The highway's stories tell of lost intellect
Two minds have had an accident
No one ever has the logic to help those in need

Your motor is to loud
The humming is as insulting
as you flash your headlights in my face

The highway's stories tell of lost intellect
Two minds have had an accident
No one ever has the logic to help those in need

Out the blue i can see the two bumpers hit
Two heaps of metal in the air
scraps from the motor on the blacktop

[HereUntilDeath]

I like it. Good job.

[XxIronistxX]

Returning from a long trip on the road
Black top and granite
as far as the emerald eye goes

The highway's stories tell of lost intellect
Two minds have had an accident
No one ever has the logic to help those in need

Your motor is to loud
The humming is as insulting
as you flash your headlights flashing in my face

The highway's stories tell of lost intellect
Two minds have had an accident
No one ever has the logic to help those in need

Out the blue i can see the two bumpers hit
Two heaps of metal in the air
scraps fromthe motor on the blacktop

i think you used the word "flash" too much in that one line..but otherwise i really like it.

[as_we_learn]

i think you used the word "flash" too much in that one line..but otherwise i really like it.

oh man that was a mistake the whole flash "flashing". glad that you thought it was good

[Mannella]

"scraps from the motor on the blacktop"

I like that line.

[as_we_learn]

"scraps from the motor on the blacktop"

I like that line.

thank you

[lostfear]

this is my favorite of the things I've seen you write.

[as_we_learn]

any suggestions?

[OveriseFan]

You have now bumped 3 pieces tonight.

Space them out, you're dominating the front page.