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Mannella
02/21/07, 09:11 AM
Simultaneous eye connection is the sound of silence calling.
My heart stops every time.
The world goes still, and all familiarity crumbles.
This is the dream I want to belong to.
Sensations of brilliant awakening, combined with grinning realizations.
But I never seem to care enough. Which is why I lay awake,
Drifting over the day, replaying every stuttered word.
Moments of conviction, the words I'll never say.
Intervening angels with waving wands of resemblance.
This has nothing to do with anyone anymore.
The window is static, the light always shines in.
The sun, the moon, the stars, the streetlights, the shadows.
They cry with me.
And when I refer to you, this place, these words,
I cry. Because I lied.

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Tom Da Bomb
02/22/07, 01:42 AM
hmm it started out great. uplifting even. but from "This has nothing to do.." down, the tone pulled a 180 on me. but bravo on the rest.

Mannella
02/22/07, 02:25 AM
I agree actually, now that you say so. Also, it seems stolen, like someone else has said it before. Kinda old almost, like we've heard it before. Such a typical thing to say maybe?