Parachute Collapse

[dakknox]

Parachute Collapse

when you die, you can't bleed
when you've bled, you won't see
when you've met, it's too late
true course has taken place
coming down, is so hard
seems health, is so low
medicopter, take your spiral

you can't take back
what was rightfully yours
parachute collapse
lifes test of attack

dreaded path, that was led
fall into deathbed
mimic that of your dreams
cutting sharp at nightmares
catchers job complete
revenge tastes bittersweet
limited now
to just time
ideas, into mind
wishing just for normal life
hope lied to you
soon it will taste like it should

you can't take back
what was rightfully yours
parachute collapse
lifes test of attack

you can't take back
what was rightfully yours
parachute collapse
lifes test of attack

soon! it! will! taste! like! it ! should!

[BuriedAlive]

um i cant really tell you whats wrong with it. for some reason i just couldnt get into it. its like the lyrics to me didnt flow. and some of the rhyming. it could use some work.

could you check my stuff out?

[dakknox]

yea, comments

[dakknox]

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