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blaarg
07/25/03, 05:04 PM
untitled (i suck with naming my songs, so if anyone has any suggestions please tell me)

when i was young
i used to walk on streets paved with gold
i knew not where they lead
and thought i'd never grow old
i remember
the first time i saw the sun rise
the rainbow after a downpour
most of all; the look in your eyes

and i thought it would last forever
but people are buried by grains of time
despite my hardest endeavor
life is fleeting; temporary, but sublime

and i remember wishing
-wishing i could stop the clock from ticking
just so i could spend more time with you
and i know it will all go away
but as long as we remember this day
the best of life will belong to me and you

as the days pass
beauty is taken for granted
a part of everyday life
is often recanted
the sun rises and sets each day
this no more special than the last
no one even noticed
how easily it had come and passed

now; an old man
the best has come and gone
wishing dearly
for one last dawn
one last rainbow
or skies of blue
wishing dearly
for one last moment with you

MaybeOneDay
07/25/03, 05:10 PM
one last moment would be a cool title...good lyrics dude..nice work

blaarg
07/25/03, 05:14 PM
Originally posted by The Notion
one last moment would be a cool title...good lyrics dude..nice work
thanks, and yea, i'll probably end up using that title

MaybeOneDay
07/25/03, 05:32 PM
Originally posted by blaarg
thanks, and yea, i'll probably end up using that title

awesome, i think it would fit the song perfectly. lyrics are very good man. nice work.

blaarg
07/25/03, 05:42 PM
Originally posted by The Notion
awesome, i think it would fit the song perfectly. lyrics are very good man. nice work.
thanks again, and thanks for the title

BuriedAlive
07/25/03, 05:50 PM
ya good song. cant really think of much else to say.

Rufio217
07/27/03, 05:36 PM
i like it