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TheFallenScene
07/25/03, 05:28 PM
The lyrics represent a kid talking about the divorce of his parents. Rose Petals shows the "love" of the two parents but they crumble it. Also the 3rd verse of the song interlocks parts of the 1st and 2nd verse kind of rapping up the song as a whole.

Enjoy.

COMMENTARY WOULD BE GREAT!

Crumbled Rose Petals

This is hopeless
I’ve known you all for several years
The lights that once glowed burned out
Won’t you give me a hug?
Have I done anything?
So you scream, I cry
This house has rotted into something uncaring

(Chorus)
And the depression settles in
As the tears will flow
I drift into a lake of sympathy
So when you’re dead and gone
Still know tomorrow will be a new scar

Take care for this is the conclusion
Upon a confession I have kept away
I find myself speechless
My tongue wrapped into a tie of guilt
I know I should have told you
This diease is ripping us apart

-Pre chorus-
Is this enough to keep me here?
I just want to breathe with ease
But you still crumble the rose petals

(Chorus)
And the depression settles in
As the tears will flow
I drift into a lake of sympathy
So when you’re dead and gone
Still know tomorrow will be a new scar

This is hopeless
(I’ve known you all for several years)
The lights that once glowed burned out
(Take care for this is the conclusion)
I find myself speechless
(Won't you give me a hug?)

(Chorus)
And the depression settles in
As the tears will flow
I drift into a lake of sympathy
So when you’re dead and gone
Still know tomorrow will be a new scar

TheFallenScene
07/25/03, 05:29 PM
Sorry the title should be "Crumbled Rose PETALS" on the main page.

TheFallenScene
07/25/03, 05:46 PM
I posted this song about 5 minutes ago. Bumps it already.

BuriedAlive
07/25/03, 06:57 PM
i really like the song but the 1st verse needs work.

TheFallenScene
07/27/03, 02:05 PM
Bump

wadejunkie
07/27/03, 03:10 PM
no one should ever say the words 'tear' and 'cry' in a song ever again. you know you dont cry.

TheFallenScene
07/27/03, 03:35 PM
Yeah..Yeah..did you like the song or not? lol

Rufio217
07/27/03, 05:50 PM
Originally posted by wadejunkie
no one should ever say the words 'tear' and 'cry' in a song ever again. you know you dont cry.



WHAT? everybody cries....