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[H20]

"If I Became An Addict, It Would Be Because Of You.
If I Became Extinct It Wud Be Because Of All The Things You Wanted Me To Do,
If The World Spinned In A Different Direction,
It Would Happen Because Of Your Eyes,
I Wake Up Every Morning, Lookin Forward To Your Lies,
Am I Alone In 'Our' Design?,
Knock Knock Darling, Hello. Im Yours, Wishin You Were Actually Mine,
Perhaps You Could Turn Over Please, I Cant Stand The Sight Of Deceit,
Betrayal At Its Peak, Ohhh Baby.. Why? ... Must You Be The Way You Are.

Change, Change.. Just For The Sake Of It,
Engage, Engage.. Just For A Little Bit,
You Dont Have To Be The Way You Are, You're Going Too Far,
I Dont Know You Anymore.. I Dont Know.. You Anymore ..

I See Your Face In A Puddle I Stepped Upon,
Maybe I Stood There On Purpose, Just To Know Whats Goin On,
If Things Were Different, And Your Face Was No Longer Red,
We Could Share Our Minds Agen, But We Have Nothing Instead,
The Moon And The Stars Shine Upon The Cars, It Reminds Me.. Of Wat Used To Be,
Buuut.. No Longer Is That.. I Slide Down Upon My Mat.. What Did I Ever Do Wrong?
Empty Streets Containing Empty Men And Women, Just Silouettes Of A Former Past,
Maybe One Day.. I Will Find Happiness At Last.. Just Not So Fast, Please Help Me.

Change, Change.. Just For The Sake Of It,
Engage, Engage.. Just For A Little Bit,
You Dont Have To Be The Way You Are, You're Going Too Far,
I Dont Know You Anymore.. I Dont Know.. You Anymore .."

Hope you guys like it :), any opinions are welcome, if its bad, please tell me so I can work on it.

[black rose]

The rhyming seems forced in many places, although this wasn't that bad for a first post. Keep working on it, try more freestyle writing, instead of always rhyming. You could be good.

[H20]

Thanks, thats much appreciated ! :P