next time

[crazeymrt]

another rough night
no beating around the bush
locked again in the pity of urself
struggling to see the good in all the bad

but turned away
ur mind does it again
locked away not knowing wat to say
fighting to keep another chance

ya ya ya livin for the next date
ya ya ya livin for the next date
you're livin for the next time

all the girls that r liked
always play u as a fool
never getting anywhere
with the 1 step forward and 2 back

ur esteem is at an all time low
yet u wanna disapear to make all well
knowing that all may be gone
yet wanting just to rough it out

ya ya ya livin for the next date
ya ya ya livin for the next date
you're livin for the next time

one day will come when all that were
and all that has will want ur autograph
rich and famous yet unlike all the rest
cuz you just livin for the next time....

[BuriedAlive]

thats not the best song i have read. it lacks a good formation. and is more like a blink song. if thats what you were getting at cool but try harder. im sure you could write stuff alot better than this.
you also used no beating around the bush, which is a common saying. look for something else to say instead.