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RomeoAGoGo
03/04/07, 08:11 PM
the creaking of subway cars smothered
the screams. the tracks were rusty
from rain and friction. the kerosene
had a very distinct odor. we pumped it
into the skeletons of cars and ran

till our legs burned and we heard
the explosions. we inhaled deeply
with each blast. the ashes were mistaken
for snowflakes. they sailed
and plunged without direction.

lightcollapse
03/04/07, 09:31 PM
shit's bomb mothafucka

RomeoAGoGo
03/05/07, 01:33 PM
no doubtttt son

lfdfforever
03/05/07, 02:18 PM
good stuff

OveriseFan
03/05/07, 04:35 PM
What's with the lack of capitalization and punctuation at the end of lines? It's really weird...

I mean, this is just typical writing I expect from you, minus the whole punctuation thing... It's not bad by any means, but it's not particularly special for you either. That's a compliment, I swear.

RomeoAGoGo
03/06/07, 09:08 AM
What's with the lack of capitalization and punctuation at the end of lines? It's really weird...

I mean, this is just typical writing I expect from you, minus the whole punctuation thing... It's not bad by any means, but it's not particularly special for you either. That's a compliment, I swear.

I understand what you meant by that.

I appreciate the honesty as always.

This is the start to something bigger.