sunrise

[crazeymrt]

in the early morning
the reddish orange bleeding through
last nights clouds burning off
as the first rays of sun touch the land

the gentle breeze
rustling of the leaves
blowing your hair
in the beauty of the morning

natural it is
painted like a picture
you will use paints
and i will show u with words

shots of orange
bursting in
like love shooting
from an open heart

the beauty shines on
even as the sun sets
like everlasting love
always present even after the night has ended

you are like the sunrise
and i the moonset
the one moment we meet
our love meets then
and forever never fading

as the fiery ball
completely emerges
life nor love stops
for it is all part of the larger scope
all in natures eternal beauty
we all lay

[Rufio217]

i like the wrod usage and the idea of the poem, but some lines didn't flow to well together...or they did, but they didn't maek sense....to me anyways....maybe they do to you, but all in all i liked it...