Train Station

[lostfear]

Magazines between mattresses
Empathy between the ears
My faiths taking leaps of its own
And there’s a wrench in the gears

I’m addicted to the way
This makes me feel
Life times relived
On old movie reels

A conversation is as much a mode
of transportation as a bus
And I’ll kiss a stranger
To get my lips off of this disgust
I don’t know why I keep coming back
Perhaps I’m addicted to the Penn,
I always find myself at 5 am
Lost and found at its station once again

If I could sit and watch the faces
Play connect the dots with the fear that erases
Your words from mine, people like knots
They all intertwine, tumors like thoughts
They both kill the mind.

[as_we_learn]

good job yet again i liked it alot.

[lostfear]

thanks man, I appreciate it. anything you can critique? good points, bad points?

[as_we_learn]

some of the rhyming felt kinda a forced but that is all

[and we whisper]

i really like this. the last stanze especially flows nicely to me. good job.

[lostfear]

hey thanks. glad you liked it.

[a speedo model]

I liked this very much. Your work has a nice touch to it, it's not to..flashy? I guess is the word but it's not overly simple. It's always on point.

[lostfear]

hey thanks josiah. I like your work too.