PDA

View Full Version : my lines. Tear them apart please.


doomcrs04
03/07/07, 10:10 PM
Be harsh and say what you don't like.

trip, drip, get a grip
a new addiction
a dirtier direction
the sicker tradition

my how you've grown
been taught the tips
teach me the tricks
you are the dark drink

misinformed and drunk
you're such a go getter
the unspeakable letter
gritty careless traitor

thanks for the abuse
a miscaculated decision
think ill regret it
hide it and forget it

pleasure takes over
change of pilot
brand new route
im lost with you.