"Quiet Symphony"

[TheFallenScene]

COMMENTARY WOULD BE GREAT!

"Quiet Symphony"

The night shadows the brightness of day
My ignorant thoughts are callous and remorseful
Stumbling with your halo around my head
Gathering around the Heaven's for protection
Seeking the creation of a poet

(Chorus)
Truth lies in the quiet symphony
Symbolic of a raging fury
This is my masterpiece
An artwork far from excellence

Knowing the truth around your lies
Creates a fold turning infinite
An ordinary strain pressed against us
Regretting weakening struggles
Unconscious of the situation
We all wait for our turn to die

(Chorus)
Truth lies in the quiet symphony
Symbolic of a raging fury
This is my masterpiece
An artwork far from excellence

A hesitant path traveling reverse
(Where the truth lies in a quiet symphony)
Screams over-looked by craving
(Symbolic of a raging fury)

-Whisper-
This is my masterpiece
An artwork far from excellence

(Chorus)
Truth lies in the quiet symphony
Symbolic of a raging fury
This is my masterpiece
An artwork far from excellence

[BuriedAlive]

i really liked it. it seemed to have alot of effort in it (meaning you didnt just write it and post it). dont stop writing, you might be as good as me some day. (haha, just playing with ya)