I Never Mention What I Promised

[Gerard W.]

Ok so I'm pretty new at writing lyrics so don't expect it to be the best but most of the time I'm writing new ones everyday to get better. Here is one of the songs Im working on. I haven't got any music for it yet so it was hard to write to begin with but I was just messing around too. Be honest and tell me what you think. Feeback would be nice if its that good but I will not be offended if not but tips and help would be nice too. If you have any questions, ask away. Thanks alot!

Note: Not all my songs are this emotional but this one was meant to be one.
Don't be too harsh. X( I know its most likey not the best.

Title: I Never Mention What I Promised



We stared from the rain clouds and moved on and said
We have met in the alley ways and ran away from the dead

And after all
This time
I went ahead and stayed

And after all
This time
I waited here and laid

We have cried mercy away
We have cried mercy away

Will you still be here waiting for me?
Or will you be like them and battle whats lies beneath at sea?

You have shown me your ways of love
From the dark, stary skies that lie to us above

We have cried mercy away
We have cried mercy away

I gave you a promise that I have never betrayed
Shot down the dead and let you go straight ahead
We will still dance through the season and rise instead

From the ashes to the growing of roses from the deepest, deep bed
The splattered of blood from the deepest, deep red

We have all fallen today
Did we all fall away?
Did we cry mercy away?
Did we all cry away?

Woah oh woah
We have drifted away

[a speedo model]

I actually liked this alot. Very good. Continue to write and post, you've got talent.