Wake Up! You've Changed.

[lostfear]

I awoke in the woods. The one place I had

tried to avoid my entire life. my thoughts,

not thoughts at all, but primal instincts.

FEEL.
FEAR.
FIRE.

My eyes feel different, it's like I'm stuck in an old movie.

Ironic how that all I ever wanted in my life

was to see the black and white of things.

When In fact, I was now a shade of grey. I

began to run. The leaves crunched under me, something was wrong. I

was low to the ground. What had I become?

[as_we_learn]

i liked it, but it seemed a little short. like there should be more to it. anyway good job man

[and we whisper]

i really like it, but like as we learn said, keep going with it.

[CellarGhosts]

I liked it, but I also think it could be longer. Seems like there could be more to the story, so to speak. But it's good.

[lostfear]

thanks, it's just the beginning to a short story I think I'm going to write

so it will expand. A LOT. :-)

[as_we_learn]

good man im looking forward to the rest

[CellarGhosts]

thanks, it's just the beginning to a short story I think I'm going to write

so it will expand. A LOT. :-)
Nice. Im looking forward to it.