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lfdfforever
03/16/07, 06:34 PM
I’m an expert when it comes to fine art
And spiny expansions you’ll never have
You can look through each rich filled window
But as it is; that’s the only thing you’ll be given to reach
My joy doesn’t spread around the world
Rather, it just stays alone in me bottle tight
Even if I gave, the given would still
Behave in a disgusted manner
Arrogant it might seem
But I’m a professional where the beginners show
There lackluster skill that couldn’t kill a single thing
Don’t deny me the proper service
I was promised to get
Don’t extend this into another childish fit
I know I’m popular where ever I step to
But oddly nowadays, where ever I go and the more things I get
The fewer friends I know
Am I another just another spoiled life?

a speedo model
03/16/07, 07:26 PM
Very good.

lfdfforever
03/17/07, 01:51 PM
Very good. Thanks man.

xsxarexsoxscene
03/17/07, 02:06 PM
I think more punctuation would have cleared up some confusion.

CellarGhosts
03/17/07, 02:38 PM
Nice. Very nice indeed haha. Good job.

a speedo model
03/17/07, 03:17 PM
I think more punctuation would have cleared up some confusion.
Woah, you don't look 16.





/Creepy

lfdfforever
03/17/07, 04:32 PM
I think more punctuation would have cleared up some confusion. sweet nectar

lfdfforever
03/17/07, 04:33 PM
Nice. Very nice indeed haha. Good job. You're too kind, hehehe.

lew_1987
03/19/07, 10:26 AM
there = their? anyway i thought it was pretty good. yeah some more punctation would have made it a better read.

iHATEapril
03/19/07, 10:49 AM
You've always been my favorite.

lfdfforever
03/19/07, 03:38 PM
there = their? anyway i thought it was pretty good. yeah some more punctation would have made it a better read.radical dude.

lfdfforever
03/19/07, 03:39 PM
You've always been my favorite.thanks sexy.