The highway loves wanderers

[as_we_learn]

Street lights have abandoned me.
Yet I'm still in a jubilant mood.
A bus can come at me to impact
with children in to add desperation

Maybe I love the way that darkness
blankets my pupil with uncertainty.
Cool air flies across my hand.
I'll have to wait for false depression to end.

Their eyes are filled with fear
and anticipation to end my life.
I won't move with green eyes
waiting for the headlights.

Maybe I love the way that darkness
blankets my pupil with uncertainty.
Cool air flies across my hand.
I'll have to wait for false depression to end.

Something's hit with the surprised faces in mind.
I love the fact that I can finally fly.
It's odd to see how children cry
for a stranger that won't be identified

[xsxarexsoxscene]

a) It should be "There ARE two lanes for the hope of bringING someone down with me"

b) I just don't like it. I love the title and think you could re-work it into something good, but it's just too jumbled. The ideas, while focusing on a central theme, don't naturally flow. And you have some lines that are just randomly placed in the middle of an idea.

[as_we_learn]

i edited the last part and i think it is better hope you like it

[CellarGhosts]

Good job. I liked this overall, but the first stanza read a little awkward, for me anyway. Mostly it's due to the line "a school bus can come at me to impact...." haha I dunno...maybe it's just me, but the words "school bus" just sound a little odd in the middle of all this haha. But other than that, it's cool. Keep at it.

[as_we_learn]

thanks man. maybe the word "school" is too many words for that line and doesn't flow right thanks again.

[CellarGhosts]

Any time, man, any time haha