I'm new at this so please give me some feedback

[xcountryqt09]

Forever, Together

Not enough appreciation is
given for

simple little walks
together

all night talks
together

sick days on the phone
together

long rides home
together

the sadness and tears
together

memories that make us laugh
together, forever

[ohreak gurl 08]

nothin personal ... just too many "together"s

[xcountryqt09]

Its a poem mocked after a specific form. In the form the last word of every couplet is the same.

[Alk3DCStars71]

the word "together" is a little repetitive, but the poem was pretty good for a new poet.