I need to win this black

[missmatilde]

a new attempt which comes out of an amazingly boring Italian class in which the poet in question was some really depressed person... I'm not that negative, at least at the end...
I hope you like this, and I'd love to read ur opinions...
tso.. pleaz comment ;-)
Matilde

[missmatilde]

okay... I really feel stupd doing this, and I hope I'm not annoying u guys... but... I really am trying to learn to write lyrics, cuz I love music really much and just singing lyrics others wrote all the time does not really feel enough to me at this point...
as I'm just starting wt this I'm probably really bad, but I'm really begging u guys on my knees 4 feedbacks, cuz u guys could hep me improve and stay far from lame styles...
so I'm making a angel \puppy face and 4 a comments if u happen to have a sec to spare
btw... how can I modify threads titles? can I?

[llwilliamsll]

not feeling the "i need to win this black"...i'll take a look at the rest tomorrow

[missmatilde]

k... thanks 4 reading

[missmatilde]

I do I change the thread title?
thanks
:blush:I feel a bit retarded:blush: