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as_we_learn
03/21/07, 08:38 PM
Autumn leaves stand still on my back
with bricks constructing my new conscience.
Taking my time on the sidewalk.
Laying next to a field of grass and rubble.

Piles of new intricate thoughts
are already filling this clean slat I've gained.
I'll carry out my new found skill
with meticulous awareness to detail.

i began to walk with a glass bottle at hand.
The bystanders create their own suspicions.
Events have led up to my same sense of glory.
The pride in my eye shows the disappointments
of the others.

Piles of new intricate thoughts
are already filling this clean slat I've gained.
I'll carry out my new found skill
with meticulous awareness to detail.

I'll confront my opponent.
The struggle is one that will last a flame's time.
Most people know I'm a contender
and I ended this at the right time.
As I walk past the corner store
the customers see my broken bottle
stained with red wine.

lew_1987
03/22/07, 05:37 AM
this didn't really do anything for me, i'm not one for this type of lyrics. the imagery didn't make me think whatsoever. sorry

as_we_learn
03/22/07, 03:52 PM
no problem man you don't need to apologize haha. i still like it man so no worries. i'll try to give something else you'd like. thanks for reading man haha.