Disease

[wishxfulthinker]

Verse:
Patiently growing, patiently losing
It sweeps through inside me
patiently brewing

Verse:
Living your fear, fearing to live
It eats up inside me
I fear to forgive

Pre- Chorus:
It sinks through walls
And into my room
Bleeds through my floor
And starts to consume

Chorus:
At night they speak through my dreams
While sleeping I silently scream

...So I bleed to stay awake instead

I'd kill to forget but you'd never let
All these hating moments you represent

...Slip from my mind, appease the torment

Verse:
Silently breathing, silently still
I breathe it inside me
It silently kills

Verse:
Burning a check point, burning my throat
It singes my crying
So I burned what you wrote

Pre-Chorus
It opens all my doors
And finds a way to get in
Seeps through the cracks
Through the pours in my skin

Chorus:
At night they speak through my dreams
And I'm tearing the thoughts in my head

...So I bleed to stay awake instead

I'd kill to forget but you'd never let
All these hating moments you represent

...Slip from my mind, appease the torment


Bridge:
I feel it in my tears
From my eyes like a flood
I feel it caried along
Passed through my body in blood



Chorus:
At night they speak through my dreams
And I'm tearing the thoughts in my head

...So I bleed to stay awake instead

I'd kill to forget but you'd never let
All these hating moments you represent

...Slip from my mind, appease the torment

[GREENatarisDAY]

alright im pretty sure this is the first song ive read by you and it seems like you may be a first time writer but i dont know. That first stanza is just awful man..."patiently losing"? im not really sure if that makes sense. The rest of the song is just a bunch wordplay it looks like and i cant exactly see what its about or maybe thats just me but i dont know. Good try though

[GREENatarisDAY]

oh and where in MN are you from...im just curious cuz im from there too

[wishxfulthinker]

The whole thing is about memories just eating you up inside. Like disease. Patiently growing. And the chorus is about bleeding to rid the 'disease', kill yourself to forget - but the disease wins either way. Memories. Your patiently ( slowly ) losing.

But I guess if I had to explain that, then the lyric wasn't very good to start out with :) I'll work on this one cause I liked the idea.

I'm not a first timer at all, I just don't post a whole lot in the lyrics forum - - check out my stuff in the poetry forum, let me know what you think.


- I'm from Blaine, where are you at?

[GREENatarisDAY]

oh cool im from Bloomington

[Alex Djaferis]

i liked it. some parts are awesome. some parts were lacking...but on the whole i thought it was pretty good dude

[towhatend]

yeah pretty good effort