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takingthursday
08/04/03, 01:34 PM
Choose Your Own Adventure Ending

Unvail the veil from the eyes of justice
To battle your glorious wrath
I pick up the phone and begin to shake
So I just laugh it up with the dial tone

Heard everyone's fable
But actually slept on the cover of yours
And between the lines
The truth falls deep into the white

We started this for me
And I'm beginning it for them
Curled up against the bathroom wall
Engraving your name with water into my arm

In my sweat and tears
Your reflection I reach out to
My blood that trickles to the dirt
Where it can be everyone's welcome mat

Too scared to speak
And too intimidated to leave
Behind this curtain if only I could reach
Awaits my shining scene

takingthursday
08/06/03, 01:24 PM
Suggestions?! Ideas? Opinions?

MMW
08/06/03, 07:07 PM
i'LL CRITIQUE YOU WHEN YOU READ MY ORIGINAL ANALIYST
MMW