waiting for the end

[xmy.only.exitx]

How much more do you think i can take?
Just because i keep fighting doesnt mean i dont sob on my pillows every night,
Thinking how i can get through another fight.
Another pain to bear, a new tear to shed,
It all keeps pounding down like the hardest summer rain,
And i keep running for shelter but
How much more do you think i can hide?
Or should i just stay in the rain
Until i'm drenched with my tears but everyone thinks i'm just wet,
Get on my knees, facing up, and let it fall down on me.
Wait for it to stop, and the good times to come back.
Search for a silver lining, even if the clouds are the darkest black.
Maybe i will because i want to be dry again,
So let the sun suck up my salty tears off me,
No one likes to live in misery.

[a speedo model]

Ehhh, I like the idea and there definitely is real emotion behind it but it falls into overused imagery. And was hard to get into. But continue to write, I see talent and I'd like to see you post more.