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as_we_learn
03/31/07, 07:56 PM
Kiss me by the parkway and headlights.
Right by the spray painted exit signs.
Lets give these spectators something to see.
Turning heads have seen our love out of spite.

We passed out below trees.
The exaustion in our breath
increases the thoughts we think out loud.
Like our nervous hands we learn
what to do with every passing second.

We'll walk next to this river of concrete.
Every step we take gets us closer to a break.
Like the twigs lying still awaiting
their own reach in this love scene.

We passed out below trees.
The exaustion in our breath
increases the thoughts we think out loud.
Like our nervous hands we learn
what to do with every passing second.

We'll be collecting our articles of clothing
by the tint of dust
across from our faces and wasted temptation.
The secrets that we continue to keep will be
left on our lips until our next altercation.

black rose
03/31/07, 09:19 PM
This is exactly what i've been trying to write for weeks. Great job.

as_we_learn
03/31/07, 09:22 PM
Thanks and my bad for reading your mind haha. Glad you liked it.

as_we_learn
04/01/07, 04:48 PM
Bumping it like a clown in a strip club

CellarGhosts
04/01/07, 04:54 PM
Nice, nice, nice haha. I'd say this one is a step forward for you, a...sort of evolution, you know? Yeah, that's not quite the word I'm looking for, but I think you get what I mean.

But I really liked this. It'd be interesting to hear it with music. Good job.

By the way - check out my new one? thank you haha.

as_we_learn
04/01/07, 04:55 PM
Thanks man and I'll check yours out right now man.

CellarGhosts
04/01/07, 05:03 PM
Cool, cool haha

lostfear
04/01/07, 06:59 PM
it seems we've lost our old regulars and you guys are the new regulars. haha

wild

"We passed out below trees.
The exaustion in our breath
increases the thoughts we think out loud.
Like our nervous hands we learn
what to do with every passing second"

loved that.

-Jake

as_we_learn
04/01/07, 07:46 PM
thanks Jake man I appreciate you reading. Means alot