My Final Conquest

[Tom Da Bomb]

I belive I have posted this one here before, but I wont have anything new new written for a day or two, so let this hold you over i guess. rip it up as much as u'd like.

-- My Final Conquest --

Although I see all the pain I cause,
It breaks my heart when I still applause,
Every bad decision that I make.
I'm hoping you all get the point someday.
I just don't feel alive around here no more.
Ill hang a sign on me that says:
"Keep walking bye, I’m not worth your time,
leave me some change and don't you dare lock eyes."

Because with me you're going no where
With me you're going no where
With me you're going no where
With me you're going no where

If only I had some gas,
id' pack some clothes in a bag,
and just drive as fast,
away from here as possible.

To the ocean or the desert,
wherever the road takes me I’m gonna let it.

And the people that I meet,
will replace the ones I miss.
At least, for a short period of bliss.
I think my, plan is flawless.
Its my, final conquest.
And I, still wish you all the best.

[missmatilde]

I really liked the first verse... it's so poetic! the first part tho is so much stronger than the rest, esp the gas verse..

[CellarGhosts]

This was pretty cool, and I like what you're going for, only...

"It breaks my heart when I still applause"

either it should be "applaud" or "hear the applause", or something. Not sure if that's a typo you made there, or what, but anyway, this thing was still pretty cool.
keep it up.

[Tom Da Bomb]

This was pretty cool, and I like what you're going for, only...

"It breaks my heart when I still applause"

either it should be "applaud" or "hear the applause", or something. Not sure if that's a typo you made there, or what, but anyway, this thing was still pretty cool.
keep it up.

holy shit your right. it should be applaud.
clap clap

[CellarGhosts]

Haha, yep. Glad to help ;)