Prisoner

[PunkPoet9945]

Prisoner in the
Kingdom of Love
No one will rescue me
except my one true love.

In my time of need,
my king will come for me
and we will live together
in the land of Panic.

In the land of Panic,
we will live love and listen
to the music of
the forever land.

[Tom Da Bomb]

yo. if no ones going to say it I will.
stop posting now. please just keep these to yourself.

[missmatilde]

Tom... she's 13... dn't be so mean... I don't enjoy this kinda stuff to, but lil kids can take it really harsh... and, she'll grow up... dn't u think we could help? u maybe, I'm not really that entitled to do so... btw, be nice to me, I'm on medication, so not everything I say makes sense!;-)

[PunkPoet9945]

yo. if no ones going to say it I will.
stop posting now. please just keep these to yourself.
ok you need to stop dissin' me you are such a bitch. i'm not tryin to get you mad but i'm just tryin to give you a piece of my mind. i'm only damn 13 i just started writing poems this year so you can just FUCK OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[black rose]

Okay so if you [punkpoet] are going to be that mean, than you just need to leave. People are going to give you critism all your life, and if you can't handle that, you will never be a poet. So chill.

[OveriseFan]

ok you need to stop dissin' me you are such a bitch. i'm not tryin to get you mad but i'm just tryin to give you a piece of my mind. i'm only damn 13 i just started writing poems this year so you can just FUCK OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I wrote very well at 13... :shrug:

Ok, here sweetie, I'll just give you a long article to go read. (Would you like a link, or for me to post it here? I'm also going to begin working on an article for AP's lyrics forum, in the vein of this article, so that we can get this forum up and running like a real lyrics forum.)

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=393365

[black rose]

I wrote very well at 13... :shrug:haha James wrote well at birth!;-)

[CellarGhosts]

I emerged holding a Waterman fountain pen and a scrap of notebook paper haha.

yeah....random haha.

And to the OP, I'm going to second what Melissa and James already said.
Peace out.

[black rose]

pssht I came out of my momma holding poetry comparable to Shakespear and Edgar Allan Poe. Beat that bitch!:-p

[CellarGhosts]

Yeah? Well I came out with a manuscript for "1984" already written, and then George Orwell stole it from me!

...of course, if that were true, I'd be a whole lot older than 17. In fact...I'd be kind of dead.
Never mind...