GREENatarisDAY
08/07/03, 12:57 AM
this song is poorly structured but i do think the lines in here make up for this, would appreciate as much feedback ass possible just like all my songs (yes i know i use she way too much)
She’s lost in him, being dragged along
doesn’t know if she’s wrong
all she knows is she hates being neglected
good for night, in his car
left wishing upon a star
she never felt a need to be protected
shattered mirror, and a restless day
cornered by his demands, and cries as she lay
she burns like every cigarette he lights
tossed around and hates everyday
lost her faith but still she pray
she falls, she gives, she fights
cold nights where she wont sleep
she knows now true beauty is only skin deep
you’re better off without him
cold nights where she wont laugh
she’s running right off track
ARE YOU BETTER WITHOUT HIM?
Still left starving for a taste of attention
sex written all over the face of false affection
broken hearted and feeling reluctant
she wants him back but knows its worse
feels more worthless than an empty purse
she’ll listen to the saddest songs over again(and over and over)
left alone with a broken heart
she’s reached the end and doesn’t know where to start
“to hell with him” she says (but she never means it)
She’s lost in him, being dragged along
doesn’t know if she’s wrong
all she knows is she hates being neglected
good for night, in his car
left wishing upon a star
she never felt a need to be protected
shattered mirror, and a restless day
cornered by his demands, and cries as she lay
she burns like every cigarette he lights
tossed around and hates everyday
lost her faith but still she pray
she falls, she gives, she fights
cold nights where she wont sleep
she knows now true beauty is only skin deep
you’re better off without him
cold nights where she wont laugh
she’s running right off track
ARE YOU BETTER WITHOUT HIM?
Still left starving for a taste of attention
sex written all over the face of false affection
broken hearted and feeling reluctant
she wants him back but knows its worse
feels more worthless than an empty purse
she’ll listen to the saddest songs over again(and over and over)
left alone with a broken heart
she’s reached the end and doesn’t know where to start
“to hell with him” she says (but she never means it)