Deny Your Own Part

[lfdfforever]

When adjectives come forward and meet you halfway
Pause, reflect, delay and determine what should be the same
There’s a new door to be open in the absence of what this was
Regrettably, I was never sure of the identify that followed us here
Electronic items force a secret between the safeties we used to have
I’m losing that something you once were
You’re convinced I’m forward facing her
A 25 hour gap sits in your shallow idea
So deny your own part
Stumble from this dark earth into this lit world
Discover the warmth in a human heart
And change one thing about yourself
So I can know people really do change
So I can be sure of something finally

[as_we_learn]

I liked everything, but the last two lines. I really enjoyed this man. Very good job.:thumbup:

[CellarGhosts]

Nice job, bro. I quite enjoyed this. Only question I have is "why '25 hour gap' instead of the standard '24?'" haha...if you get what I mean...if not, my bad haha.

Anyway, good job.

[lfdfforever]

Nice job, bro. I quite enjoyed this. Only question I have is "why '25 hour gap' instead of the standard '24?'" haha...if you get what I mean...if not, my bad haha.

Anyway, good job. 25 hour gaps refers to the time distance from my house to this girls house far far away. thanks for reading and enjoying

[lfdfforever]

I liked everything, but the last two lines. I really enjoyed this man. Very good job.:thumbup: thanks dudeeeeeeeeeee

[CellarGhosts]

25 hour gaps refers to the time distance from my house to this girls house far far away. thanks for reading and enjoying
Oh, okay, I see. I just was curious, since the term "24 hour gap/wait/etc" has been used quite a bit in lyrics, or at least that I've heard, and I was just wondering...if that makes sense, hahaha...

But anyway, sure thing. Glad to help.

[as_we_learn]

thanks dudeeeeeeeeeee
No Thank You Dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[missmatilde]

I really liked all of this!
I dunno why, but I totally loved this line "There’s a new door to be open in the absence of what this was"

[lfdfforever]

I really liked all of this!
I dunno why, but I totally loved this line "There’s a new door to be open in the absence of what this was" thank you so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh