"A Bleeding Eye"

[afallenconcept]

Title: "A Bleeding Eye"
By: A Fallen Concept
From: Self Titled EP

A love from the heart that still survives don’t you thrive on my pain watching me twist and turn in the agony of your way. You see me bleed out an endless stream for a chance to be with you just one more time. Just twist this knife an push a little deeper to end the pain. Do you see my blood as it spills from these crying eyes, eyes bleeding all the pain that is my agony. It’s a faded photo on a broken screen locked on to those eyes waiting for them to stare back at me. All that’s left is a shattered heart still keeps beats for you. A heart that can never be stopped. With every open wound it grows stronger. (2x)( twist this dagger into my gut It will not stop all that I love. Do you see my blood as it spills from these crying eyes, eyes bleeding all the pain that is my agony. It’s a faded photo on a broken screen locked on to those eyes waiting for them to stare back at me.) We been down here before can’t you see all I have ever cared for is you my love.

(a note the lyrics are still changing as i go along i add some stuff and change some stuff)

[ISuckYoungBlood]

Title: "A Bleeding Eye"
By: A Fallen Concept
From: Self Titled EP

A love from the heart that still survives don’t you thrive on my pain watching me twist and turn in the agony of your way. - NOT A BAD OPENING, NOT A SUCKER FOR THESE DIE HARD LOVE STORIES THOUGH

You see me bleed out an endless stream for a chance to be with you just one more time.

Just twist this knife an push a little deeper to end the pain. - OK THATS STUPID ONCE YOU GET TO KILLING AND SHIT.

Do you see my blood as it spills from these crying eyes, eyes bleeding all the pain that is my agony. - OO CAN WE HEAR ABOUT YOUR SPLEEN AND INTESTINES POPPING OUT TOO, WOW TO MUCH GORE FOR A SONG.

It’s a faded photo on a broken screen locked on to those eyes waiting for them to stare back at me. - WHERE DOES THIS LINE COME IN AFTER A HOLE THING ABOUT YOU DIEING FROM THIS PERSON ASSUMING ITS A GIRL KILLNIG YOU? ALSO PHOTOS MAJOR CLICHES.

All that’s left is a shattered heart still keeps beats for you. A heart that can never be stopped. - YOU JUST SAID PUSH THE DAGGER FURTHER AND TWIST SO YOU CAN DIE BUT NOW YOUR SAYING YOUR HEART WILL ALWAYS PUMP FOR HER EVEN AFTER SHE WAS KILLNIG YOU?

With every open wound it grows stronger. (2x)( twist this dagger into my gut It will not stop all that I love.

Do you see my blood as it spills from these crying eyes, eyes bleeding all the pain that is my agony. - ONCE AGIAN SAME LINE AS BEFORE TO MUCH GORE

It’s a faded photo on a broken screen locked on to those eyes waiting for them to stare back at me.) - ONE AGAIN A CLICHE AND RANDOM REMARK

We been down here before can’t you see all I have ever cared for is you my love. - IF YOU CARED FOR HER THEN HOW DID SHE GIVE YOU PAIN? font = arial

[afallenconcept]

Yes i do agree with you thats why im still working with it. When i had wrote it, it was just an out pour of emotions on the screen and some parts were taken from some bad pop emo songs i had written. Its a true story and a fucked up situation. She changes her mind to damn much. But thank you for going and taking the time to do that tho, its greatly apreciated.

[ISuckYoungBlood]

No problem your very smart for noticing this was just helping you not making fun of your work. I would love to see your song after you edited and stuff and maybe I can help more with it. Also goodluck with the girl man. Shit like that always sucks I know how you feel.