Every bit of air

[missmatilde]

I'd love to know what you guys think of this! ;-) Thanks in advance for reading!
btw, question: what genre would you imagine these lyrics sang in? just curious, thanks again for your time! ;-)

[as_we_learn]

I always love the flow that your pieces have. They roll off the tongue you know.I liked this alot so keep it up.

[missmatilde]

thanks JR, I always love ur sweet comments, both you and Chris are getting the habit of making my days :-) and I sure don't mind it!
btw, do you think there's something I could improve in this one?

[as_we_learn]

This line right here "Reminiscences of know tunes," Maybe know should be known. That one part kind of messes with the flow of the piece. The photo reference is a little cliche, but doesn't plague it from being a terrible piece. Still good job.

[missmatilde]

Know was known, sorry, messed it up ;-)...
the photo line I wasn't that sure myself about.. do you think something like passages or quotes would work better?
thanks so much for your time JR! :-)

[as_we_learn]

No prob here to help Matilde. Isn't it past your bedtime young lady,

[missmatilde]

It's not even midnite...but yea, the Italians have school on sat morning, so I shoud go to sleep... thnks again JR.
btw what does it stand for? (if you want to tell ;-))
nite :-)

[as_we_learn]

Nothing really. It was suppose to be Jr. because of my first name being my dad's, but on my birth certificate it says J.R. I'm going to have to make some name up so I can lie to people;-)
Anyway good night. You go to school on saturdays?

[lew_1987]

you have improved so much in so little time on here. i'm glad you've taken everyone's advice on board, it seems to show

[missmatilde]

thanks a lot lew, as you said I really have to tank all you guys and your enormous