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Ilovepoprock
04/15/07, 04:04 PM
I used to think, I'd wake up one day
And know right where I was
I used to think that clarity
Would come from above
I thought everything would work out on it's own
I couldn't have been more wrong

But, now all my apathy
Is flying right back at me
Everything I do is everything wrong
I wouldn't be here if I could have been more strong

My minds eye is so obscene
My dirty dollar bills never been more green
I flash a smile at my next victim
And she doesn't even scream

It's so easy...

To become everything it is you hate
Wrap it up in your good intentions
And call it fate
cause, it's so easy...

To be a whore inside the sheets
Forget everything you believe
and make it deep
it's too easy...

To get you close into my arms
Tell you some would be "white lies"
And do you harm
Because, your so easy!!

a speedo model
04/15/07, 04:25 PM
I liked it. A bit...depressing. But it's good.

missmatilde
04/16/07, 06:03 AM
I tot luved the first verse, as Joshua said (sorry dnt know how to write it) it is depressing but good! :-)

0starter0
04/16/07, 06:23 AM
I liked most of it. Again a few lines felt a little out of place but good piece overall.

lostfear
04/16/07, 07:05 AM
Reminds me of the brand new song Millstone because of the lyrical set up "I used to..."

it's so bitter. and sort of immature.

but I relate to the reasons and themes in the story so I don't hold it against you.

a speedo model
04/16/07, 09:36 AM
I tot luved the first verse, as Joshua said (sorry dnt know how to write it) it is depressing but good! :-)
Josiah? Haha, it's alright.:-)

Actually when people see my name written out (like doctors and such) they call me Joshua, haha.