Portrait of Fire

[lostfear]

these lyrics go with personally I think the most pretty song I've written, which I think is half the charm of the song, so I promise to post a link to the whole song when I get a recording


A brush of fire
Paints your face
A frayed wire
A revolver in lace

Does that fire?
Burn strong?
Or is it to be put out
Like I knew it all along

Your fool’s gold, a fool’s hold
On me, on my honesty
Leave me waiting, anticipating
Your every move, your every move

You’re three, maybe two of a kind
a hard choice for a poetic mind
She said I’ve lost you in my eyes
I said I think, think you're right

I know she’s right
I know she’s right

As Snowflakes fall on my scars
You curse as you look for stars
A near-love experiment
I hit the bar but it’s already bent

You’re three, maybe two of a kind
a hard choice for a poetic mind
She said I’ve lost you in my eyes
I said I think, think you're right

I know she’s right
I know she’s right

Don’t even calculate
You made a mistake…

you run the risk of falling
When thinking on the edge
And I have a nasty habit of
Standing to close to the ledge

You’re three, maybe two of a kind
A hard choice for a poetic mind
I said I’ve lost you in my eyes
she said I think, think you're right

she know I'm right
she know I'm right...

[as_we_learn]

These lyrics are good. The flow of it is pretty kickass I have to say. This is pretty flawless in opinion man so I have no complaints. Everything is very fitting to each other. This has a Brand New feel to me, so I congradulate for that. By the way mind checking out my piece. Sorry for being such a spammer.

-J.R.

[missmatilde]

I tot loved all of this, it is so good, would love to hear the song when u record it ;-):-)

[lostfear]

thanks to the both of you:)


yeah I'll try to get the actual song up when I record it.

[CellarGhosts]

This was cool.

Good flow, and while it didn't amaze me or anything, I still dug it. And if you post a link to a recording of this, I'll definatley try to check it out, haha.

Good job.