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JimmyPop333
08/08/03, 09:18 PM
DONT BACK DOWN

We're losing out on the current situation
Right now it's a tragedy
Act out against all this corruption
This is not how it was meant to be
(Pre-Chorus)
Lies won't change anything in time
and time won't change anything that's right.
Lies don't mean anything and time won't change anything don't back down.
(Chorus)
Don't Back Down
It's another contradiction
Don't Back Down
Even though they'll never listen
To the ground
We'll go if we depend on
Anything or anyone
Don't Back Down

That's all I have so far, I'm kinda going for a singalong style chorus that's why it's repetative. I'd much appreciate some feedback. Thanks.

JimmyPop333
08/09/03, 01:07 PM
bump

JimmyPop333
08/11/03, 01:40 PM
will someone please comment on this. I'm just looking for some feedback, it can be good or bad.