greys1104
04/17/07, 03:02 PM
It's defenatley a first draft.Comments would be nice.
The sorrow, deep darkness in her eyes,
Is beckoning you to be sucked in.
They’re emotionless.
Dead.
She’s gone numb,
But isn’t that what she wanted?
Not to feel the pain,
Not to remember you.
Well she got her wish.
She’s numb.
But she still remembers you.
She can’t forget.
It’s still in her mind.
The stupid waiting and not knowing.
When she walks into the room.
Everyone notices.
The tension,
you can feel it.
The sorrow,
tastes so bitter,
diluted by her patience.
It’s crumbling,
Like cookies, trying to beat the sorrow.
A battle she can’t control,
A battle within herself,
she can’t even fucking control it.
How pathetic,
you’d think if it’s in her,
she could stop the war,
and have peace with herself.
The sorrow, deep darkness in her eyes,
Is beckoning you to be sucked in.
They’re emotionless.
Dead.
She’s gone numb,
But isn’t that what she wanted?
Not to feel the pain,
Not to remember you.
Well she got her wish.
She’s numb.
But she still remembers you.
She can’t forget.
It’s still in her mind.
The stupid waiting and not knowing.
When she walks into the room.
Everyone notices.
The tension,
you can feel it.
The sorrow,
tastes so bitter,
diluted by her patience.
It’s crumbling,
Like cookies, trying to beat the sorrow.
A battle she can’t control,
A battle within herself,
she can’t even fucking control it.
How pathetic,
you’d think if it’s in her,
she could stop the war,
and have peace with herself.