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[banzi_69]

Um i wrote these and i'd like to hear what u guys have to say about them..thanks!


WAITED BY ASHLEY

I don’t know how I feel,
That’s just me now,
Around me my skin peels,
Like a corpse with a lost love,

It seems,
When people speak,
They fuck with my peak,
So I don’t know what I think,

Everyone’s got a piece,
Of me,
My heart is torn,
And I am sore,

I’ve waited and waited,
Not letting go, oh not now,
Tried to find,
Where is my mind?

I’ve waited and waited,
Not letting go, fuck it now,
I can’t feel love,
Forever numb!!!!

I need time to think,
What do I like,
How do I feel?
Don’t want my skin to peel,

What’s it with you,
Is love all u do?
Why can’t I feel it too?
Stop this shity mood,

I want to feel,
I want to steal,
A heart,
And leave my mark!

I’ve waited and waited,
Not letting go, oh not now,
Tried to find,
Where is my mind?

I’ve waited and waited,
Not letting go, fuck it now,
I can’t feel love,
Forever numb!!!!

Sick of waiting!
Let it come! Oh yeah!
Let me feel! Now!
Get rid of these clouds!

Waited! Waited!
Forever waiting!


SIN BY ASHLEY

What does she feel?
Is it love for real?
Love then again,
Could be a sin,

She’s lost it,
Tried so hard to mend,
But it falls apart,
Leaving a mark,

What could happen,
When she falls,
Waiting for that call,
That it’s alright,

Why can’t she let go,
Her heart won’t sew,
To love again,
It’s a sin!
SIN!

Everything’s a sin!
When it comes to love again!
Why can’t it just go away!
Everything’s not gonna be ok!
SIN!

Walking cold and alone,
Feeling like a stone,
Hoping to die,
So the pain will go away on the inside,

She’s so fragile and broken,
Can anyone help?
She needs to be spoken for,
Can’t take no more,

Somebody, somebody,
Help her,
See past all the pain,
It can’t be a sin!!!!
Why can’t she let go,
Her heart won’t sew,
To love again,
It’s a sin!
SIN!

Everything’s a sin!
When it comes to love again!
Why can’t it just go away!
Everything’s not gonna be ok!
SIN! SIN! SIN!!! SIN!!!

THE OTHER SIDE BY ASHLEY

ANGER AND RAGE,
RUN'S THREW MY VAINS,
WHY CANT I TURN THE PAGE,
AND ESCAPE TO A NEW PLACE,

ITS SEEMS,
EVERYTHING IS A MESS,
I FEEL SO PISSED,
COULD IT BE, THAT I AM DEPRESSED?

THIS ISNT ME,
ITS NOT HOW IT SHOULD BE,
TIME TO RUN,
FOR THAT SUN!

ALL I SEE IS A STORM,
CANT FIND THE WARMTH,
I'VE KILLED MY DOVE,
SO I CANT FEEL LOVE,

THE WORLD PASSES ME,
HOW CAN THIS BE?
I FEEL SO ALONE,
TAKE MY HEART AND,
START TO SEW,

LIFES NEVER EASY,
NOW I AM QUEASY,
WHERE HAS MY HEART GONE,
AM I DONE?

I DIE ON THE INSIDE,
BEEN PUSHED A SIDE,
DONT WANNA HIDE,
HAVE I LOST MY MIND,

THIS ISNT ME,
ITS NOT HOW IT SHOULD BE,
TIME TO RUN,
FOR THE SUN!

ALL I SEE IS A STORM,
CANT FIND THE WARMTH,
I'VE KILLED MY DOVE,
SO I CANT FEEL LOVE

[a speedo model]

Ehhhhh, littered with cliche ideas and imagery. But continue to write, it takes time.