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xxmarsxx899
04/18/07, 10:12 PM
Creation died by Toxication by Anarcho_Adams

Electricity ruining a pretty perfect sky.
The questions ask'd way?
A beautiful night. Covered with big lights.
The smell of toxication willing bodies with radiation.
Clouds and stars, ruins by trucks and cars.
Power lines buried underground burning good creation.
My toxication cuffs up your trails of smoke, dizy and numb.

xxmarsxx899
04/20/07, 12:20 PM
just so u know me and my bf are sharing one screen name on this site. post comments on his poem please?

OveriseFan
04/20/07, 05:59 PM
Learn grammar.

That's my only complaint. The poor (or non-existant) grammar skills make this unreadable.

xxmarsxx899
04/20/07, 09:32 PM
Ok. What have i spelled wrong so you, so you can give me a real comment.

The Database
04/21/07, 12:55 AM
:shrug:

OveriseFan
04/21/07, 07:53 AM
Ok. What have i spelled wrong so you, so you can give me a real comment.

Spelling =\= Grammar