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The Database
04/19/07, 05:19 PM
Nobody liked my last one, but here's another one anyways. =P
Tell me what you think!
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I'd walk off this bridge
If I knew you weren't underneath the water
Ready to hold me under
Drown me in my sorrows
Girls like you are all the same
Don't you know
You don't even care
It definitely wouldn't surprise me

How can you hold the knife
And hold me back at the same time
Make up your mind
Before this kills me

Misery loves company
But you don't want anything to do with me
You'd rather be all alone
Than to spend a second by my side
And it sucks but its hard
To move on when you have no path to follow
Even if I make it out of here alive
You'll be waiting for my return, knife in hand

The Database
04/21/07, 12:53 AM
Nothing?

CellarGhosts
04/21/07, 11:57 AM
Sorry, but this just didn't do it for me.

You did put forth an effort though, and that does show potential. Just keep at it, as you can only improve.