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sce/ne
04/19/07, 11:52 PM
Im just looking for some feedback on it. Just really want to know what people think of it. I write a lot...just never really show it to people.



I’m sorry
That’s not even the hardest thing
It won’t mean a thing….unless I change

Just hear me out
Don’t tell me it’s my right
I’m tired of setting fires I can’t fight

These past six months have been great
If you don’t count the days I see your face
Or the people I’ve hurt trying to live outside His grace
Searching for those to replace your face

Just hear me out
I never meant to make you everything I hate
But prides always in the way

I’m so tired of fighting in this place
I long to live trying to feel His grace
But pride is never bashful in your case
I hate it that I made you feel out of place

Believe me when I say “I never meant for it to end this way”

atticus1492
04/20/07, 12:02 AM
Don't rhyme face with face.