Carved (What goes around, comes around)

[ImpulZe]

Carved (What goes around, comes around)

Reach out your arms.
Crawling around your skin.
Hold out your wrist and carve your problems into it.
This is your ticket.
This will make you famous.
Take your words and eat them.
Take your pain and frame it.
Tear off your fingernails.
Dig them deep into the ground.
Hang from every tree limb.
Burn down every town.
Inject you wih some poison.
Reject you from the crown.
Destroy our city tonight.
But what goes around comes around.

C&C Please...IMO this is my favorite I have ever written. LMK.
KTHAX
-james

[ImpulZe]

ugh commetns it

[ImpulZe]

antyhing guys?

[lew_1987]

this really was nothing new. its been said before and its mostly cliche. the only bit saving it was "This is your ticket. This will make you famous." i thought that was good.

[CellarGhosts]

Eh, ...what Lew said.

[Period Piece]

Again, what Lew said. There was nothing wrong with it and I like the style, but it has been said before.